I think my essay is almost done
Jan 29, 2006 Writing
I’ll need to look at it again tomorrow and I still need an ending, a vignette of some kind. It’s so hard to get one right without turning maudlin.
J is coming over tonight and I asked her to read it; I’m nervous. It made Brett cry (well, swallow hard and blink a lot) and even though we’ve talked about these things I think that reading it is different. I also gave her a pseudonym in it but she can veto that or give herself another one as she sees fit.
I’m very nervous. I hope she likes it. I hope it doesn’t make her want to kick me in the shins.



January 30th, 2006 at 2:33 pm
Good luck! Endings are dreadfully hard, sometimes–I have to fight a tendency to wrap everything up in some cheesy way that makes me sound like “wise-old narrator” from a coming-of-age movie, or something.
I am sure you will think of something brilliant…
January 30th, 2006 at 3:41 pm
I don’t know if it is just my computer, but right now all your posts are GIGANTIC on the main page. Did J read the essay?